The feast of the Visitation celebrates the lovely moment in Luke’s Gospel (1:41-56) when Mary goes to visit he cousin Elizabeth, who was also against all expectations bearing a child, the child who would be John the Baptist. Luke tells us that the Holy Spirit came upon them, that the babe in Elizabeth’s womb ‘leaped for joy’ when he heard Mary’s voice, and it is even as the older woman blesses the younger, that Mary gives voice to the Magnificat, the most beautiful and revolutionary hymn in the world. There is much for the modern world to ponder in this tale of God’s blessing and prophecy on and from the margins, and i have tried to tease a little of it out in this sonnet. I am grateful again to Margot Krebs Neale for her inspiring image, and , as always you can hear the poem by clicking on the ‘play’ button or the title.
The Visitation
Here is a meeting made of hidden joys
Of lightenings cloistered in a narrow place
From quiet hearts the sudden flame of praise
And in the womb the quickening kick of grace.
Two women on the very edge of things
Unnoticed and unknown to men of power
But in their flesh the hidden Spirit sings
And in their lives the buds of blessing flower.
And Mary stands with all we call ‘too young’,
Elizabeth with all called ‘past their prime’
They sing today for all the great unsung
Women who turned eternity to time
Favoured of heaven, outcast on the earth
Prophets who bring the best in us to birth.





This one moved me to tears. Thank you.
Thanks Joanna, and thanks for re-tweeting/reposting -M
Truly exquisite.
Thanks Deb, glad you liked it.
“kick of grace”, turned eternity to time” wonderful, wonderful wonderful…
Blessed are you, Malcolm Guite, “for flesh and blood did not reveal…”
A very lovely beginning to my day! Thanks, Malcolm!
Thanks!
‘unsung’. I see them often if I travel on the bus here in Seattle. In these times of social turbulence around the meaning and purpose of women’s lives, this sonnet is particularly moving. Thank you Malcolm.
lovely. thank you.
Again, beautiful. Thank you.
I chanced upon your recent book in Exeter uni library. Excellent. So I googled you… Fantastic! Rock, God, poetry and academia – superb combination. And terrific sonnets. Thank you. Richard
Thanks Richard Glad you liked the book, and the poem. These sonnets are all going to be published as a single volume by canterbury Press in December. Thanks for the encouraging comment.
Malcolm, you are soaring xx
Thanks xx