Silence: a Sonnet for Remembrance Day

As we approach Remembrance Sunday I am reposting this sonnet about the two minutes silence, which was first published in my book Sounding the Seasons.  I’m posting it early so that any one who wishes to, can use it in services or events on this Remembrance Sunday.

So here is how it came to be written. On Remembrance Day I was at home listening to the radio and when the time came for the Two Minutes Silence. Suddenly the radio itself went quiet. I had not moved to turn the dial or adjust the volume. There was something extraordinarily powerful about that deep silence from a ‘live’ radio, a sense that, alone in my kitchen, I was sharing the silence with millions. I stood for the two minutes, and then, suddenly, swiftly, almost involuntarily, wrote this sonnet. You can hear the sonnet, as I recorded it on November 11th some years ago, minutes after having composed it, by clicking on the title or the ‘play’button if it appears.

The striking image above is ‘Poppy Day’ by Daliscar and the one below is ‘Silent Cross’ by Margot Krebs Neale

Silence

November pierces with its bleak remembrance
Of all the bitterness and waste of war.
Our silence tries but fails to make a semblance
Of that lost peace they thought worth fighting for.
Our silence seethes instead with wraiths and whispers,
And all the restless rumour of new wars,
The shells are falling all around our vespers,
No moment is unscarred, there is no pause,
In every instant bloodied innocence
Falls to the weary earth ,and whilst we stand
Quiescence ends again in acquiescence,
And Abel’s blood still cries in every land
One silence only might redeem that blood
Only the silence of a dying God.

Silent Cross by Margot Krebs Neale

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8 responses to “Silence: a Sonnet for Remembrance Day

  1. zimsuzieq

    Dear Father Malcolm. How very poignant to hear this today. In Canada it is now 11:11 as I begin to hear your voice. Our silence is palpable as we bear witness to the atrocities of another ‘war’ a country against a people-who-no-longer-have a country. May God forgive US for our silence.

  2. Gillian Fosdick

    This is wonderful. Thank you.

  3. Malcom,
    Just before I read this, Claudia read to me, John McRay’s In Flander’s Field. I was moved by your poem, especially the twist at the end,
    “One silence only might redeem that blood
    Only the silence of a dying God”
    Very powerful words…
    See you tomorrow for your birthday!
    Yours,
    Jerry

    Sent from my iPhone

    • malcolmguite

      Great to hear from you Jerry. I’ve just finished leading a retreat here on the Isle of Man. Will fly to Belfast tomorrow!

  4. Malcolm, your sonnet this morning is particularly touching, especially with another war raging in the Middle East.
    Thank you for this glimpse into how you came to write it, and especially for these powerful last lines,
    “One silence only might redeem that blood
    Only the silence of a dying God.”

  5. and there was silence in heaven for about half an hour, Revelation 8:1.

  6. so very timely and moving! Thank-you and God bless you for sharing your gift that mingles beauty and meditation so profoundly!

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